Your 100 Word Challenge this week is to write 100 words – no more, no less – based on the prompt – IThe girl approached…
This week, we wrote our own interpretations of The Girl and the Fox. This prompt is from the fox’s point of view…how will you interpret it?
I can’t wait to read them!
Miss T
So you’ve heard the girl’s story now its my time to shine! So my side of the story was I didn’t kill those ducks. They had a party and they got hyper, so they wanted to fly to the Moon! I was not going to let them jump out of the tree and I did everything I could to make them stop. But I was too late. The ducks sprang from the looming trees. They flapped, but they couldn’t do it so they fell to their deaths. And you thought it was me! All you do is jump to conclusions!
nice amy!
The Girl approached me, it was pitch black. I couldn’t move my body, I realized that I was tied up. I could just see her silhouette in the moonlight. Her eyes were as black as death, with anger and pain. She held a knife in her hand as sharp as a needle. 52.
I saw she was limping and then she spoke, ” don’t be afraid, all I will do is take you out of your miserable life”. She grinned. Please don’t do this, please. I will do anything. No!
Who are you, I asked.
Your worst nightmare.
I felt a sudden pain; blackness.
Thanks Maya love yours too!!!;)
I killed the ducks.It was only until the girl approached that I knew that I was in trouble.Real trouble.In order for my survival I galloped past the damp trees and then it happend. I tripped over a bush of brambles and went tumbling over a hill. Gliding above the girls head, I could see her withdraw her shiny dagger as I tumbled to the ground.I knew it was a matter of time until I could be dead.I got up quickly and backed off.I quickly ran off.But I was safe?But, was I?
I scampered away from the menacing sight. Her ducks; dead. I had known this girl for quite some time now, she hadn’t known me though. I follow her everywhere, stealthily watching her every move. Before dawn, when the forest was asleep, a bear from the other side of the wood had come and slaughtered her livestock.
As the door hinges creaked and we met in the moonlight for the first time. The girl leapt after me as I shot through the darkening wood. She hurdled over the bush and landed beside me. Knife to throat, she growled, ‘ It is all over now’. And it was.
The thin air greeted me the sun peeked over the hills as usual but I didn’t hear that usual sound it was silent I only heard the whistling of the wind and then I found out why … the ducks were dead all of them .
they swam in their own blood it made me sick to even think about it.
so I thought would I do should I just leave it or do something about it
and what did it and where he is now .I looked around on the snowy beach aha it left prints. Now I know what to do.
The Girl Approached
As hunger took over my mind I caught sight of some plump ducks. I set off to find and kill ALL of them to feel replete.
Once that deed was done I lay behind a bush to rest but a small girl approached with a feather in one hand and a cruel blood stained knife at the ready in the other, She’d come to seek and kill in revenge.
The twigs snapped beneath her feet as she neared.
The sweet aroma of sticky toffee pudding from her breath engulfed my snout and I forgot myself. YUM YUM.
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