Your 100 Word Challenge this week is to write 100 words (no more, no less) about a magic house! Good luck and keep commenting on your classmates’ writing…
Once there was a man who came to a very bad ending. He was walking though a beautiful forest where birds cheeped happily. Even though he could hear the tweeting of birds and the rustling of leaves, and the children playing, there was still a silence in the air. Then he came to a house, and it said on the door: ‘Come into the garden’. Then he walked through the door to a wonderful garden. Suddenly the garden went topsy-turvy, and he saw his worst fear walking towards him. He spun around, hoping to get outside. The door wasn’t there.
He was expecting me to be there, 12 ‘o clock midnight he sent me a note. I knew what it read out ” meet me here ” but who was it from ? I had know idea. It was a big, old house with a graveyard outside it. I opened the creaky gate and walked through the graveyard to the front door, I was at the door all creeped out. I knocked timidly on the door knocker, nothing happened, all I heard was a big crash. I decided to sit down and not do anything for a while. Suddenly the door opened and a man in a brown hat slyly said ”I’ve been expecting you”, and pulled out a dagger.
We were just taking another boring, dull walk through the forests in Suffolk when we reached it. The golden corn meadow. Me and Jessie stared at it long and hard. We had never thought it to be real and we only ever considered it just a fairy tale, but there it was, right before our very eyes!!
We ran ahead and left mum and dad gaping at what was at the bottom of the fields.
We sprinted over to the glowing, golden cottage and were greeted by an old, wrinkly woman. “I’ve been expecting you, Louis!” I glanced at Jessie. she became a blur then everything disappeared . That’s all I remember.
Sister no.1: where are we?
Sister no.2: I’m scared.
Sister no.1: we’re LOST!!!
cue , wolf howl and cackling witch.
Sister no.2: Look, there’s a light… Come on!
They walk towards the weak light, in the small window of a tumbledown cottage covered in vines.
Sister no.1: Let’s go inside.
Sister no.2 It looks kind of Creepy
Cue smoke from house ,they go in.
As they shut the door the house “dissapears”
Cue smoke machine till you can’t see the house. Take house off set now.Cue advert break.
Jewels diamonds rubies and like,
Could be sitting in that house all night,
The only thing that stops the crime,
Is the crackle of witches when clocks chime.
Ghosts, magic and monsters to,
Could be sitting in witches brew,
No need to be afraid,
Our the words that take you to your grave.
No one dares explore the den,
Where people go but can’t come home again,
Every part of me wish I knew,
Why, where what and who.
What keeps the secrets in,
The owner of the house, their kin,
Or perhaps the house’s moan,
With every whisper and every groan.
In a city called Flare valley, stood a mansion on a hill. Flare hill. No one dared go up the hill in summer; the sun was so hot it could melt you like an ice cube in boiling water. The person who lived there never came out. Once on Halloween two boys went up there; Tim rapped on the door… Nothing, as they turned to leave a man fell out, scabs covering his face apart from his milky white eyes, foam pouring from his mouth, he stammered his last words scattering foam like confetti. “This house is evil” he said.
Tom’s heart pounded and his pulse raced. What was he to do?
Tom was an adult and was walking home through a forest to get to his house and on the way through the trees he saw something odd.
On an autumn afternoon, Jack was walking home from work when something caught the corner of his eye. This thing was a strange house in the the middle of the forest. Jack was terrified but refused to be a coward so he explored it only to find a goblin that took him prisoner along with other prisoners in the magical house…
A boy called Jake searched an abandoned city and found a house with no doors. Jake wanted to get in but he couldn’t. There were no doors! Then he realised that he could break through the window. He did so and found every thing upside down. There was a red button. He pressed it. Immediately gravity left him and he began to rise and turn upside down. He thought that every thing had gone back to normal. But he was truly upside down. He pressed the button again. He was again on the floor. Jake had discovered a magic house.
A boy walked into a house and there was a room that was full of food then a door in the corner he walked to the door and opened it and then it was a room full of potions and he looked back and there was no door. ”What where is the door?” a old crooked man walked up to the boy and said “Why trouble me little boyyyy you fool hahaha now die”. The man drew his sickle the boy threw his cap at the mans face the man shouted out furiously. Then the boy stamped on the sickle then hit the man on the temple then ran to the door.
Many moons ago, there was a very strange family; they were called ‘The Mads’. You for one have probably not heard of them, but some people say they lived in a magical house in Kentish Town. One day someone went into the house, in fact it was a friend of mine. He told me that it was hard to get in, but it was worth it, because he found out that the house was magical in many ways. He told me how it was magical but I am afraid that I am sworn to tell no more.
By Thomas
Breaking News; an unidentified man has been found dead at a house in the Welsh valleys. The murder squad was called in after a local farmer reported the incident to the police. The villagers believe that the house is mystical and haunted, they never saw the man who lived in the house. The farmer knew the man as he delivered food on a regular basis, but they only did business through a chained door and he never saw his face. The murder squad bashed the door in. When they came out they were as pale as ghosts and completely dumbfounded.
Once there was a mysterious house that lay deep down in the woods
Where screams would be heard everyday through wood
A man would stop in his tracks as the evil wizard came out of a crack
His screams would be heard as he was dragged away
And never saw the light for the rest of his days
He was dragged into the house crawling with goblins
As the wizard would mumble mysterious words
A great purple mist started to emerge
A great big book fell into the wizards hands
He muttered more words
And the hut started to collapse.
My magical house would be like the Tardis because it would be small on the outside and huge inside. It would fly in the sky, like the one in the film “Up” but without the balloons, float on the sea like an elegant yacht and dive underwater like a powerful, hi-tech submarine, depending on my mood. I could make it invisible too. My magical house would have one big room with everything I needed inside – kitchen, bathroom, bedroom, living room and garden and when I wanted to redecorate, I could click my fingers and “hey presto!” everything would look different.
A little girl was walking through the woods until she saw a big house, it looked empty. She opened the creaky door, there was a forest . She gasped in shock, she was called Molly. Molly lay in the grass when suddenly a bird came shooting by and loads of animals came rushing by . She saw a fire, she ran from it through a door. The room changed, it was a chocolate factory !!! She dipped her hand in the chocolate and licked it, picked a sweet off a tree, it was strawberry, the grass was also sweet, there were many rooms to see !!!
Inside a Magic House
Rats are in your closet (but then they disappear)
Snakes are friendly
And you don’t have to pay for things
Inside a Magic House
You can eat chocolate every day
If you are playing football you can change the score
You can SEE what people are THINKING
And you can make people say things you want them to say
Inside a Magic House
You can shoot a bow and arrow
And it hits the target every time
Inside a Magic House
You can turn your chandeliers into a disco ball
And have a party every night
I turned a corner (I was going for a walk with a friend at the time but had got lost) and then I saw it – an old battered dolls’ house lying in the street. I went nearer to have a closer look. When it was new it would have been grand and it was very big, but now the paint was peeling and it was all worn out. I decided to take it because I could use it anyway. I was rummaging around when I came across something weird. I pressed something on it and was never the same again…
Once there was a man who came to a very bad ending. He was walking though a beautiful forest where birds cheeped happily. Even though he could hear the tweeting of birds and the rustling of leaves, and the children playing, there was still a silence in the air. Then he came to a house, and it said on the door: ‘Come into the garden’. Then he walked through the door to a wonderful garden. Suddenly the garden went topsy-turvy, and he saw his worst fear walking towards him. He spun around, hoping to get outside. The door wasn’t there.
He was expecting me to be there, 12 ‘o clock midnight he sent me a note. I knew what it read out ” meet me here ” but who was it from ? I had know idea. It was a big, old house with a graveyard outside it. I opened the creaky gate and walked through the graveyard to the front door, I was at the door all creeped out. I knocked timidly on the door knocker, nothing happened, all I heard was a big crash. I decided to sit down and not do anything for a while. Suddenly the door opened and a man in a brown hat slyly said ”I’ve been expecting you”, and pulled out a dagger.
It wasn’t my fault. I swear it.
We were just taking another boring, dull walk through the forests in Suffolk when we reached it. The golden corn meadow. Me and Jessie stared at it long and hard. We had never thought it to be real and we only ever considered it just a fairy tale, but there it was, right before our very eyes!!
We ran ahead and left mum and dad gaping at what was at the bottom of the fields.
We sprinted over to the glowing, golden cottage and were greeted by an old, wrinkly woman. “I’ve been expecting you, Louis!” I glanced at Jessie. she became a blur then everything disappeared . That’s all I remember.
THE CURSE:part 1 scene 3
Sister no.1: where are we?
Sister no.2: I’m scared.
Sister no.1: we’re LOST!!!
cue , wolf howl and cackling witch.
Sister no.2: Look, there’s a light… Come on!
They walk towards the weak light, in the small window of a tumbledown cottage covered in vines.
Sister no.1: Let’s go inside.
Sister no.2 It looks kind of Creepy
Cue smoke from house ,they go in.
As they shut the door the house “dissapears”
Cue smoke machine till you can’t see the house. Take house off set now.Cue advert break.
Jewels diamonds rubies and like,
Could be sitting in that house all night,
The only thing that stops the crime,
Is the crackle of witches when clocks chime.
Ghosts, magic and monsters to,
Could be sitting in witches brew,
No need to be afraid,
Our the words that take you to your grave.
No one dares explore the den,
Where people go but can’t come home again,
Every part of me wish I knew,
Why, where what and who.
What keeps the secrets in,
The owner of the house, their kin,
Or perhaps the house’s moan,
With every whisper and every groan.
In a city called Flare valley, stood a mansion on a hill. Flare hill. No one dared go up the hill in summer; the sun was so hot it could melt you like an ice cube in boiling water. The person who lived there never came out. Once on Halloween two boys went up there; Tim rapped on the door… Nothing, as they turned to leave a man fell out, scabs covering his face apart from his milky white eyes, foam pouring from his mouth, he stammered his last words scattering foam like confetti. “This house is evil” he said.
Tom’s heart pounded and his pulse raced. What was he to do?
Tom was an adult and was walking home through a forest to get to his house and on the way through the trees he saw something odd.
On an autumn afternoon, Jack was walking home from work when something caught the corner of his eye. This thing was a strange house in the the middle of the forest. Jack was terrified but refused to be a coward so he explored it only to find a goblin that took him prisoner along with other prisoners in the magical house…
by Gabriel
A boy called Jake searched an abandoned city and found a house with no doors. Jake wanted to get in but he couldn’t. There were no doors! Then he realised that he could break through the window. He did so and found every thing upside down. There was a red button. He pressed it. Immediately gravity left him and he began to rise and turn upside down. He thought that every thing had gone back to normal. But he was truly upside down. He pressed the button again. He was again on the floor. Jake had discovered a magic house.
A boy walked into a house and there was a room that was full of food then a door in the corner he walked to the door and opened it and then it was a room full of potions and he looked back and there was no door. ”What where is the door?” a old crooked man walked up to the boy and said “Why trouble me little boyyyy you fool hahaha now die”. The man drew his sickle the boy threw his cap at the mans face the man shouted out furiously. Then the boy stamped on the sickle then hit the man on the temple then ran to the door.
Many moons ago, there was a very strange family; they were called ‘The Mads’. You for one have probably not heard of them, but some people say they lived in a magical house in Kentish Town. One day someone went into the house, in fact it was a friend of mine. He told me that it was hard to get in, but it was worth it, because he found out that the house was magical in many ways. He told me how it was magical but I am afraid that I am sworn to tell no more.
By Thomas
Breaking News; an unidentified man has been found dead at a house in the Welsh valleys. The murder squad was called in after a local farmer reported the incident to the police. The villagers believe that the house is mystical and haunted, they never saw the man who lived in the house. The farmer knew the man as he delivered food on a regular basis, but they only did business through a chained door and he never saw his face. The murder squad bashed the door in. When they came out they were as pale as ghosts and completely dumbfounded.
Once there was a mysterious house that lay deep down in the woods
Where screams would be heard everyday through wood
A man would stop in his tracks as the evil wizard came out of a crack
His screams would be heard as he was dragged away
And never saw the light for the rest of his days
He was dragged into the house crawling with goblins
As the wizard would mumble mysterious words
A great purple mist started to emerge
A great big book fell into the wizards hands
He muttered more words
And the hut started to collapse.
My magical house would be like the Tardis because it would be small on the outside and huge inside. It would fly in the sky, like the one in the film “Up” but without the balloons, float on the sea like an elegant yacht and dive underwater like a powerful, hi-tech submarine, depending on my mood. I could make it invisible too. My magical house would have one big room with everything I needed inside – kitchen, bathroom, bedroom, living room and garden and when I wanted to redecorate, I could click my fingers and “hey presto!” everything would look different.
A little girl was walking through the woods until she saw a big house, it looked empty. She opened the creaky door, there was a forest . She gasped in shock, she was called Molly. Molly lay in the grass when suddenly a bird came shooting by and loads of animals came rushing by . She saw a fire, she ran from it through a door. The room changed, it was a chocolate factory !!! She dipped her hand in the chocolate and licked it, picked a sweet off a tree, it was strawberry, the grass was also sweet, there were many rooms to see !!!
The mouse
Once there was a mouse, who lived in a house
and made his own cheese.
He could ring a bell and play a shell
And never ever got fleas.
One day he pondered that he had never wandered
Outside the garden fence
So he looked in his wallet
And found a 50 pence
But as he wandered he stumbled upon a magical house
And said “This is perfect for a mouse”
And so he decided to move all his things and move in
And so to this day there is a mouse that lives in a magical house.
Inside a Magic House
Rats are in your closet (but then they disappear)
Snakes are friendly
And you don’t have to pay for things
Inside a Magic House
You can eat chocolate every day
If you are playing football you can change the score
You can SEE what people are THINKING
And you can make people say things you want them to say
Inside a Magic House
You can shoot a bow and arrow
And it hits the target every time
Inside a Magic House
You can turn your chandeliers into a disco ball
And have a party every night
I turned a corner (I was going for a walk with a friend at the time but had got lost) and then I saw it – an old battered dolls’ house lying in the street. I went nearer to have a closer look. When it was new it would have been grand and it was very big, but now the paint was peeling and it was all worn out. I decided to take it because I could use it anyway. I was rummaging around when I came across something weird. I pressed something on it and was never the same again…